Florence, just make sure your work is edited. If you have 2 people or 10 people--it makes no difference, just as long he/she is giving you positive criticism by editing your mistakes.
is the revised copy the rough copy after the corrections are made? also, for the brainstorming and choosing a book, do you need a mind map or a document?
I'm good with your rough copy. Print out rough copy and show evidence that you've made corrections on it. This helps me to see how your revisions were made.
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i mean a small amount of people vs society?
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ReplyDeleteOf course. There are different conflicts at play in any good book.
DeleteCan we (group 2) start our thesis/essay
ReplyDeleteI haven't really discussed the essay. However you can start an outline/rough plan of your essay--a skeletal structure.
Deletemr.singh, you have to have 3 people edit your work before handing it in right?
ReplyDeleteif not, i will hand it in if you say yes, i will not hand it in i think it is yes, but whatever
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Deletei have to finish revised copy to get 1 more percent, right?
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Deleteyou have to finish all of it by the end of the weekend to get an extra percentile.
DeleteFlorence, just make sure your work is edited. If you have 2 people or 10 people--it makes no difference, just as long he/she is giving you positive criticism by editing your mistakes.
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ReplyDeleteis the revised copy the rough copy after the corrections are made? also, for the brainstorming and choosing a book, do you need a mind map or a document?
ReplyDeleteI'm good with your rough copy. Print out rough copy and show evidence that you've made corrections on it. This helps me to see how your revisions were made.
Deletei have a question...are we doing the literature circle project after the new year?
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DeleteHow long does the summary have to be for me?
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Can the book review have 570 words including titles, headings, etc?
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ReplyDeleteNo. The quote should be powerful to stand on its own. It should be able to give an essence of Ender's thoughts and he perceives his goal
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